I reworded the verses in my last post below. I put it in the first person (it was originally written from me to me and to other people too) to see how that would work. I think I like it better in first person. 


I am the one
still laughing, still crying,
still happy
long after the sun has come up

I can scale the hill just faster
than you can dream
and you can just only dream to keep up with me

I am the new billion dollar
fighter jet
0 to 500 in half a second
sensitive to the slightest touch

I will glide higher
turn around faster
My rate of change
of rate of change
of rate of change
jerks the fabric of life

I am the new superconducting
magnetic levitating train
my electric emotion
my laughter keeps running
and running long after they all run out

all my pairs of bits
are in harmony
every pair both in synchrony
as one

I am always a little bit more
just a little bit superfluid
just a little spilling over the top
just a little bit still swirling
when everything else stops

I am below the temperature of ice
but I am not frozen yet
superfluid
You'll have to dream me
and use your imagination
see me before you see me
boiling sub zero over the top
long before I show you

I am right here next to you
just as solid as you
but half of me is always
quasi-really something you can only dream
You always have to see with your mind
a person that must be believed
to be seen
I am just softer
than you can imagine
just smoother than you can see
You have to be just gentler than gentle

dream dream
just the faintest glow in the dark
there is a reason
there is a truth
just one that I can't see
yet

I am a deep well
You always diving into
You always pulling me to the surface
here with you
I am not too deep
I always make sense
your heart is always here with me

I am not wrong
I am not too far gone
I am right here
You are right here too
I think I am in the dark
but I am not lost
You know where we are
we are close to home
I am not that far gone

they think I am lost
but I am not lost
they just don't have long enough arms
they just don't have sharp enough eyes